Tsuki no Megami no Taizu (Tides of the Moon Goddess)

Custom Kidou

Name: Tsuki no Megami no Taizu (Tides of the Moon Goddess)

Type: Hadō

Number: 98

Effects: This Kidō is one that does two things. Firstly, it causes the opponent(s) to become stunned, which lasts for as long as the kidō is active. Once the opponent(s) are stunned, the second part of the kidō begins. The opponent(s) are trapped within five moons that are summoned and take up a position creating an equilateral pentagon over an area. Those that are trapped, the moons movement will cause gravity in that area to be pushed and pulled, cause damage to everything and everyone who is surrounded by the moons/trapped within the moons. Moreover, all of the moons need to glow before the attack is fully completed, so there is time for opponents to escape. Although, escaping is difficult especially if they are stunned or slowed. If the opponent(s) can get out of the moons within three rounds, they are safe. However, once they are glowing, after five posts, opponents cannot escape and will feel their bodies being ripped apart by gravity.

This ability affects everything trapped within the circling moons, from the ground to the night sky above. Moreover, there are three drawbacks to this single ability. The first drawback is that it will take a total of five posts for this attack to be at full power, as each of the moons takes a single post to charge, as each of the moons glow brighter, giving a hint of a countdown. A second drawback is that kidō user could be trapped within this gravity well and could be hurt severely or even killed if he is not alert. A third drawback to this attack, is that after Tsuki no Megami no Taizu has been released, the five moons will shatter and will weaken the kidō user severely. Due to this, it is a dangerous kidō, and one that should never be used unless it is necessary; and then it is meant to be a One Shot, One Kill attack.

Incantation: Shio no ugoki, tsuki no ugoki. Watashi no mae ni sorera o hakai shi, Tsuki no Megami no Taizu! (The tides move, the moon moves. Destroy those before me, Tides of the Moon Goddess!)

Notes: Due to the strength and the destructive force of this kidō you must be at least a Level A to even be able to learn and control it. Since this one was created by Corgan, he knows it, but is to scared to use it, since it can be extremely dangerous. In order to learn this kidō, the one wanting to learn it must get staff approval. Moreover, due to the nature of this Kidō, it could be considered a Forbidden kidō, and if so, all the rules about them apply. Additionally, if you are planning on using this kidō in a thread, you must let all players within that thread know and let them decide what happens to their characters.

Honestly, I recommend scrapping this Kido for a number of reasons. If not, get ready for some major changes. First off, you don't say how large the so-called "moons" are. You also don't describe what you mean by "stunned". Paralysis makes movement impossible, which makes this Kido unblockable. Even without that, you still say people can't escape no matter what in the next sentence. Tier-wise, you'd likely need to be at least S-4+ to use this spell, much higher than you listed. And this is a conservative guess.

good point Gin. gonna take this one off and redo it at a later date. Thanks for the input.